Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Hate or Love

In fire,
i singe
It is going to burn me alive
My skin has burnt
My soul is parched
My bones catch this fire
You touched me everywhere
now where should i run away?
Tell me,
the place where you wont barge in.
How am i going to survive?
Shall i do something with this knife?
and just close my eyes.
You completed me in perfect way
and left me in the middle of this way.
Like you always said
"you will have more prints of me
on your soul"
but now these prints
make me moan!
I feel your touch in the middle of night
i feel someone holding me tight.
I want to hate you tonight
so that i can stay out of your sight

P.S:I was impressed by this "When one tears away the veils and shows them naked, people's souls give off such a pungent smell of decay"


Saman said...

awwwww !! tHis is simply amazingg!!
Like it shooo muchhhh :D

Anum said...

this is so cute !!

Anonymous said...

"my skin has burns,
my soul is scarred"

does it looks fine ??

nice ideas .. and u did really a good job !!

Zahra said...

@ saman
thanks sweetie:)
@ anum
Haaaan zaaaaaaaalllllllaaaa:D
@ prats
cudn get you on this....
anyways thanks but do let me know if it has error:D

Abhra Pal said...

you have written a very nice poem out there, keep writing....

Balaji said...

awesome, keep writing. Cheers..!!!

Zahra said...

Thanks to Abhra pal and balaji!