Thursday, September 4, 2008

Dance on tunes


Hold my hand in yours
and slapdash me in the lime light
where we are not aware of presence of people anymore.
Bring me close,
let your sight peep in me
and witness me deeply
not making me feel awkward in your eyes.
See inside me,
deep inside.
Place which still i haven't explored!
Sketch my inner picture in your eyes
'coz now i want to see myself from your way.
Place your other hand on my back
letting me feel you,
filling spaces where i lack.
Little conscious i get
You move the hair lock from my face
caressing me on the back of my ear.
With little shyness on my face,
you come closer and
kiss my neck.
With confused look on my face
i gaze.
You turn me around
on the pure tunes of heart.
and whisper me in my ear
"let's dance on heart tunes"
while touching my heart.

The strings of my heart
gave a music to my song
we were lost at last in
the beats of our heart.....

6 comments:

hassan said...

i guess GHALIB can better comment ...

yours_nonie said...

Hi zahra......
U have written so beautifully hand in so simple words...I really loved it...I wish I would be ur Love(bf wala)........y nt u publish a book or send ur poems to some magazines......seriously one more thing.....ur choice of pics are absolutly matachable.......i m touched......
I would like to add few lines after this...as i would be in ur place...

"let's dance on heart tunes"
while touching my heart.

The strings of my heart
gave a music to my song
we were lost at last in
the beats of our heart.....

dont know ki kya likha hai......[:D]..God bless you always...
Love you

Zahra said...

haha nonie:P
see i told you am commited!!
dont want to ditch;)
and the clines you added are beautifull
main chura liya hai issay:P
thanks girl:)

Zahra said...

lol....cant ask ghalib to come and comment...
filhaal tumhi kardo!

Zahira said...

Nice romantic poem! :)

Zahra said...

thanks zahira