Monday, November 24, 2008

Wilting Rose


Days have passed
Those nights did not last
Our scent was lost
After the day we fought
I halted there
knowing that one day
you will come here
I know my mistakes
which my selfish love made
Now i can recall
how many times you have stopped
I don't know where i went wrong
unable to explain
unable to explore
This is the only thing i know
"It doesn't hurt to be honest you know"
Your these words
make me beg my Lord
I understand
am bit too late
but please be my mate!
Touch this wilting rose
from your hand
and grant it the love it lacked

3 comments:

Pretty Me!! said...

needs some formatting otherwise good one !

Sushma Sindhu said...

Hii,
Nice blog. Touchy compositions..
Keep it going.

Wel, don't forget to visit my dream blog
http://mydreamwritings.blogspot.com/

Regards,
Sushma

Zahra said...

@ prats
i had the same thing in mind....there is sth wrong with this .I ll surely work on this but later:D(am having exams soon na;))
@ sushma
thanks sushma:)